Very nice. Pitty that it is so heavy on the front with all brown on the head, and eyes covered totally.
I personally like approximately 60% silver/grey and 40% brown on an Ochiba.
The ginrin is fairly good and when judging ginrin B, I believe the ginrin is more important than pattern?
Remember that it will compete against all ginrin varieties except Go-Sanke/Utsuri and it is quite a large category with lots of competition.